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just a simple glance
Not a light at the end
Maybe not even a friend
It stands guard to tell me
Open your eyes, see
It does taunt and tease
Promises to please
It leads us on a journey of stress
Something I need of, less
There is stands a beacon
And we just keep on seekin'
Where it leads we do not know
Follow we must, there we shall go
Follow they do our young ones
like we are their shining suns
The point means peace
At last a chance for final release.
~ Penelope Anne Bartotto
March 28, 2007
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"the point means peace". How true.
Thanks for joining. I'm amazed that you and Secret Agent Mama are able to produce poetry in 100 words!
I absolutely love it, my fellow Mama in Poetry!
Great job. Really great.
The relief at the end of this poem is palpable. Nice job.
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